Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Television and online streaming videos in the past few years has become the sole of the younger generation. No one in
this
modern Era can imagine Their lives without the digital world. And
consequently
this
has become a major reason for the declining numbers of the readers, and I agree with
this
fact. Reading has been an important part of human development in centuries. When the digital world had not come into existence people use reading materials for acquiring knowledge and learnt about the nearby civilisations through it. Reading Gives a boost to the creative imagination of the reader,
for
example when ever we
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example, whenever we
example whenever we
read anything we start
imaginingThat
thing like if it is
written I
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written, I
held her hand and took her for a walk on the beach we imagine a couple holding hands and taking a walk but
this
failed in watching videos. Reading is the best equipment to learn any language, understanding grammar, formation of sentences can only be improved by extensive reading Parents and schools can easily keep a check on the content like what kind of books the children are going through but keeping a check on television and watching videos online is
next
to impossible. Watching criminal web series, adultery shows on television and online is a huge impact on going children, these kind of content that I would the focus
from
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of
their respective careers and
lead
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leads
them
to
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in
a wrong direction and bringing the kids back to the right path becomes very difficult.
Therefore
, reading is always a better option than anything else. Just not parents and
schools but
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schools, but
the government should
also
take necessary steps in encouraging the youth to read more frequently. Opening libraries can help in providing
variety
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a variety
of books. School can implement compulsory reading of books for students apart from the curriculum.
Instead
of giving gadgets and video games
to
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for
the children, parents should give the
youngsBooks
and reading materials which will eventually help in shaping an individual's character.
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