The diagrams show total global population between 1900 and 2000, and its proportions according to region.

The diagrams show total global population between 1900 and 2000, and its proportions according to region.
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This
graph illustrates the global
population
from the
year
1900 to 2000
along with
with the regional proportional values in percentage.
Overall
, the
population
has
been
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significantly increased all over the world
at the end
of the period.
In addition
, the regional number in
year
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is 1.6billion at 2000 it reached to 6billion. In the
year
1900
overall
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the overall
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population
is below 2
billion
and it slightly increased in 1920
then
it drops down in 1930 to 1
billion
people.
Moreover
, the
population
is not stable and
its
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under
2billion
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2 billion
though it has fluctuations until 1970. After that, the
population
gradually increased to 6
billion
in the
year
2000.
While
looking for more details, In 1900, Asia and Europe had 60% and 25% of the world's
population
comparing
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to other countries, but both
were
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decreased by 6% and 9% in 2000. Latin America and Africa had a little growth in 2000 with 8% and 10% compared to 1900 with 3% and 4%.
Whereas
North America and other remains same in
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the
year
with 5% and 3%. Middle East and North Africa were added in
the
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2000 with
the
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a
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population
of 6%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, year, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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