People believe that the government should financially support retired people, others believe that retired people should care for themselves. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.

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a wage

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rom governments while others believe that people who are retired should care themselves without any backing.In

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nce the average age for becoming retire is ap

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fortunately people will lose their physical powers and maybe they will lose their mental healths.Th

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ople who are retired might be un

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ey might not hire as a worker from any company.For

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ople who are retired might not have any support countries economies. In co

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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

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workers'

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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

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perates t

act as a barrier between; stand between

separates

heir budgets not only active workers but

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retired people.When they cut retired pe

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peoples'

peoples

alaries active luckıly workers might earn much more money when we compare the their todays salaries.

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tive workers affect countries economic situations positively,s

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countries'

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government's

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vernments should subsidize retired people as long as they live,s

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workers'

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e taken from active workers budgets ,

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nce governments se

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act as a barrier between; stand between

separates

separate

heir budgets differently when they are pa

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paid