Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

Each year the
university
has to take some major decisions about how
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
funding should be distributed. Personally, I believe that sports activity has
same importance
Suggestion
the same importance
as the libraries in a
University
. So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree that universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activity as they give to their
university
library. I feel
this
way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
essays
.
First
of all, not every student is a scholar, that means everyone has a hobby and not everyone likes studying. There are some students who prefer sports over studies and they even
excell
distinguish oneself
excel
excelled
excels
in the sports. Because of
such
students the
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students, the
University
should spend
equal amount
Suggestion
an equal amount
of money to build up good
play-grounds
an area where many people go for recreation
playgrounds
playground
, hire
good sports coach
Suggestion
a good sports coach
and spend on other
such
activities.
Nowadays most
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Nowadays, most
of the schools and colleges have a sports quota for admissions as well. Students who are excellent at their game can get admissions on the sports quota even if they have a low academic record. My friends personal experience is a compelling example of
this
. From the very beginning of the college, he had realized that he was not good at studies, so he used to bunk classes and go to the basketball court to practice his
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport. By the end of the year, he was taken on the College's basketball team because of his excellent performance in the Inter-college match. His parents were always worried that he would never be able to get into a god
University
for post graduation,
However
, due to his outstanding record in sports, he got admission in one of the top
University
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Universities
for management.
Secondly
, currently every
University
has to take care of their global ranking, the better the ranking, more students will be attracted towards the college.
Although
, there are many aspects on which these rankings depend, sports is one of those aspects. The
university
is judged based on the number of sports activities held by a college and
also
the number of players that are good at sports from the
university
. Due to
this
reason
also
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that
University
Suggestion
the University
Universities
should spend
same money
Suggestion
the same money
as they spend on the libraries to promote more and more sports activities and players. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that sports activities being as important as studies, should get the same funding as does the
university
's libraries.
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