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TOPIC: In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Reading has always been
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 an essential way in the process we access to knowledge. The technological revolution
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 has an enormous impact on the method of reading. In recent years, more and more people prefer reading e-books
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for
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 books. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh its disadvantages
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 and foremost, our books are easier
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in the direction of
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 search and purchase thanks to the fast speed of the internet. In the past, we
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had
 to libraries or book stores. It took a lot of time to find and get the
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something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 ones. But with e-books, we just need to tap the titles and one click to buy. It is simple and
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convenient
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, e-books can store enormous data. With a mini electronic device
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 as a computer or smartphone, we can save all of the information without being worried about lost. It will be easy to carry everywhere. We always have to carry
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 a heavy bag with the traditional method.
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, e-books have a variety of ways to highlight important information. We don’t have to worry about making them dirty or ugly like
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 books Even though e-books have a lot of advantages but their drawbacks are indispensable. Reading in a long time with huge information, we will stick our eyes to the screen of the electronic device. It is harmful to our eyes. With the rise of e-books, the attendance of readers in libraries will be narrowed down and it has a bad influence on the development of libraries and the tradition of reading. In conclusion, it is deniable that e-books have become a trend among readers because of their convenience. But
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 books still irreplaceable in many readers’ hearts. When we enjoy reading in free time, we should use
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 books, but when it comes to assignments or works, e-books are good choices. We should preserve both methods of reading.

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