The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006
The chart illustrates which typologies of digital
games
(mobile phone Use synonyms
games
, online Use synonyms
games
, console Use synonyms
games
, handheld Use synonyms
games
) had been sold from 2000 to 2006. The units are expressed in $bn.
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Overall
handheld Linking Words
games
are the most sold of all and their global Use synonyms
sales
increased from almost $ 12000000 in 2000 to arrive just below $ 18000000 in 2006. All the Use synonyms
games
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rised
their global Correct your spelling
raised
sales
but the console Use synonyms
games
, as it is possible to see the money spent on these Use synonyms
games
decrease every year, from almost $ 6000000 in 2000 to approximately $ 3000000 in 2006.
In the year 2000 mobile phone Use synonyms
games
and online Use synonyms
games
had no Use synonyms
sales
, the online Use synonyms
games
started to Use synonyms
be sell
in 2001 whit a very little amount of Change the verb form
be sold
earns
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earning
then
, from 2002 to 2006 their Linking Words
sales
increased rapidly until reaching more or less $ 8000000.
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Mobile
games
started to have considerable global Use synonyms
sales
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the
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,
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the
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apply
games
. Use synonyms
Then
their Linking Words
sales
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where
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games
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the
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those of
console
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a console
game
.Fix the agreement mistake
games
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