The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006
The chart illustrates which typologies of digital
games
(mobile phone games
, online games
, console games
, handheld games
) had been sold from 2000 to 2006. The units are expressed in $bn.
Overall
handheld games
are the most sold of all and their global sales
increased from almost $ 12000000 in 2000 to arrive just below $ 18000000 in 2006. All the games
considered rised
their global Correct your spelling
raised
sales
but the console games
, as it is possible to see the money spent on these games
decrease every year, from almost $ 6000000 in 2000 to approximately $ 3000000 in 2006.
In the year 2000 mobile phone games
and online games
had no sales
, the online games
started to be sell
in 2001 whit a very little amount of Change the verb form
be sold
earns
. But Wrong verb form
earning
then
, from 2002 to 2006 their sales
increased rapidly until reaching more or less $ 8000000.
The mobile
phone Correct article usage
Mobile
games
started to have considerable global sales
in the
2002Change the article
apply
,
when they were at the same level as the ones of Remove the comma
apply
the
online Correct article usage
apply
games
. Then
their sales
increased constantly until 2006, where
the sale are lower than handheld Correct word choice
when
games
and online games
but more than the
double Correct article usage
apply
of
Correct pronoun usage
those of
console
Add an article
the console
a console
game
.Fix the agreement mistake
games
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