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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: Say which advertisement you are answering Describe which course/s you want to teach, and explain what it/ they would be about Explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you in response to
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advertisement number 2442, given in the daily Dawn newspaper, regarding the current job opening in your esteemed institution for the post of a lecturer. Owing to the importance of marketing in
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 era of fierce competition, I would like to serve at your college through teaching the Principles of Marketing and Brand Management to the boys and girls of our community especially to those who cannot afford
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high level
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 university education,
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, they have
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 to excel in these fields if provided the right level of knowledge and guidance through the
mini courses
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 designed for the delivery of these specialisms. These
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 will help them in understanding the ways of identifying customer demands and how to
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 them profitably. I ensure my suitability for
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 job as I have done
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 in Business Administration with a specialization in Marketing.
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, I have
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experience of 10 years
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 teaching at
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vocational colleges.
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, I consider myself fully eligible to serve in your organization. I am sure you will not regret making the decision of giving me a chance to teach in your night classes. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Arsh Idriess Pathania

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