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many people think social media websites have a negative effects on individual and society do you agree or disagree?

#people #media #websites #effects #society
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Noone
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No one
 nowadays
doesnot
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does not
 have social
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websites espically
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websites, especially
websites especially
facebook
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Facebook
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 Individual and
society
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 can take
adventage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
 of social media
websites
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 through many ways but many people think reverse and see that they have a negative
effects
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effect
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Iam
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I am
 not
comeletly
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 agree with
this
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 opinion
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social
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Social
 networks are very useful for one and
society
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,
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,
 one has
facebook
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Facebook
 can communicate anyone abroad and chatting face to face easily
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In addition
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 to that
,
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,
 if
individual
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an individual
the individual
 has a website
,
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,
 he can
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 any courses in any website and has a
certificates
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certificate
 in short time
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,
this
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 will save time and effort
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.
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society
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
Society
 can take advantage of social
websites
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,
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,
 through creating
websites
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 for serving people to finish some social papers like car license and birth certificates that will help
society
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 getting red of crowd in
govrnmental
relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state
governmental
 centres
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 on other side some yung people can use sociah networks to waste time or creating pages to spread unreal news

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