Some people believ that music should be taught in the schools, while others belive that its best to focus on science and computer. Do you agree?

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The curriculum is updated regularly according to the needs, interests or abilities of the learners. Owing to
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, some ed
ucationalist b
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elieves that the syllabus should focus on subjects related to
science
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and technology rather than focusing on the
music
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. I argue that teaching
science
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has more benefits than
music
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;
however
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,
this
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cannot be the reason to drop the
music
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subject from the syllabus. Studying IT and
science
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course provides better job opportunities to the students. Everyone around the globe is talking about intelligent robots, self-driving cars and colonization of Mars.
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goal cannot be achieved unless there are enough skilled researchers and engineers. The demand,
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, for students graduating from
science
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course is ten times more than any other
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. Adding to
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, the world is facing scarcity of talented researchers in various fields because of which probability of getting a well-paid job is higher than any other
field
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. Having said that, studying
science
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is not everyone's cup of tea. To succeed in the scientific
field
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, one should be comfortable with mathematics, physics and chemistry. Not every student is interested in studying these subjects;
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they must be provided with other choices
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as
music
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.
Besides
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this
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, some students are born with an innate talent for
music
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, which makes them more successful in the
field
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of entertainment.
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, Arijit Singh, a well-known singer from India, is far more famous than that of many scientists and researchers.
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, excluding the
music
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from the curriculum is not justifiable. In conclusion, I agree that studies in the
field
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of
science
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and computers provide better opportunities for graduates.
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,
this
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cannot be a reason to stop teaching
music
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as some students might have the talent to excel in the
field
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of
music
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.
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