Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, it is believed that successful sports professional are earning good
amount
of money
over other sports professionals. Several people consider this
phenomenon justified but others belive
it unethical. In my accept as true; take to be true
believe
opinion I
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opinion, I
belive
that in today's accept as true; take to be true
believe
society
successful sports person earn more as compare to others due to popularity
and great carrier
in the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
such
sports.
Nowadays, majority
of people prefer to watch cricket over other sports. Suggestion
the majority
This
is due to the popularity
and craze among the society
towards that sports
. It is absolutely true that most of the popular sports Suggestion
sport
person
can earn good Suggestion
people
amount
of money
due to several reasons. The main reason behind it is excessive
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an excessive amount
amount
of funding provided by the government to that particular sport authority through which they can attract the society
towards that sports
and the authority can generate Suggestion
sport
lot
of Suggestion
lots
money
by charging few
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a few amount
amount
from public for sports tournament's. The another
reason is most of the popular brands make not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
proposal
to successful sports professional to become Suggestion
a proposal
brand ambassador
. Suggestion
brand ambassadors
a brand ambassador
However
, it is quite difficult to see such
kind of opportunities and popularity
in other sports.
There should be equality in every sports profession not
only in terms of Accept comma addition
profession, not
money but
by providing proper and adequate facilities and Accept comma addition
money, but
carrier
opportunities. Government should take action the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
in
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on
such
other sports profession where lack of opportunity and carrier
growth is. Government should provide the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
adequate level
of Suggestion
an adequate level
fund
to Suggestion
funding
such sports authority
so that they can as well rise and Suggestion
the such sports authority
such sports authorities
society
can get attracted towards it. This
leads to solve such
phenomenon as our society
belive
that successful sports person can earn huge Suggestion
believes
believe
believed
amount
of money
.
For example
: I persoy
experienced it when I asked a teenager that in which sports field do he want to make English soldier killed in a rebellion against Henry IV (1364-1403)
Percy
carrier
if he get an opportunity and why? So he replied cricked and there is shocking reason
behind it and it was Suggestion
a shocking reason
popularity
and huge Suggestion
the popularity
amount
of money
in that field.
In conclusion, I can say that successful sports professional can earn lot
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a lot amount
the lot amount
amount
of money
as compare to other profession. However
, this
issue can be resolved if government
should take action by providing Suggestion
the government
equal level
of funding and good opportunities as well.Suggestion
an equal level
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