Some people think money is the best gift to give it to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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It is irrefutable that the juveniles feel delightful on receiving gifts. While some believe that it's best to give some

money

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as a present to them, I agree with the people who think that it is a bad idea. Some elderly people, who find it difficult to choose something relevant for the new generation, prefer giving cash as

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simply saves their time to think about a prefect

gift

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, some people

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think that their taste would not be appreciated by young people.

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, grandparents generally prefer giving

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to their grandchildren as a present because they hesitate that their choice of things would not be the preference of today's generation.

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, they try to play safe.

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, I strongly believe that children should be given proper gifts rather than cash as it helps to develop a respect for all kinds of thing and people who have put an effort and time to choose something for them.

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, any child can misuse the

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as they can spend it on drugs and cigarettes without the knowledge of their parents.

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, other forms of gifts can be supervised by their parents and they can decide whether it should be given to them or not.

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, a child given a play station as a

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during the exam week can be delayed for a few days as his parents can supervise it. In conclusion,

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some people think that the best thing that could be given to young people as a

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is cash as

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does not require a lot of effort to put into while choosing a present and it

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lowers the risk of the

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being disliked by them. But, I believe that it is not a good idea to give them loose

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and they should be given proper gifts

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for the above mentioned reasons.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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