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It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#city #life #countryside
Nowadays, The value of market
such
 a thing like Electronics, Home accessories, Automobile sector etc. Are play an important role in human lives compare with the previous decades.
Therefore
, on one side some people think that living in a
city
 is better.
On the other hand
, some public believe that their life is good to live in the
countryside
. I equally believe that both the side is good for what is the main purpose of people. I give my opinion and my point of view according to my knowledge.
Firstly
, Living in cities is major profitable for the growth and development of the children.
Also
, Facibilities for the family is far better as compared with to live in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
. But, For live
this
 kind of lifestyle and stay in the
city
 is highly costly compare to stay in the
countryside
.
Moreover
, For people entertainment like shopping mall, theatres, and restaurants are across the country is far less compared to their numbers in the
city
.
However
, Stay outside the
city
 is relatively peaceful. There is no noise pollution compare with
city
Suggestion
the city
.
Furthermore
, There are many industries are all across the
city
 and from that it is quite good for the employment purposes. Pollution and the number of vehicles is quite less compared to the
city
.
Although
, The transportation problem is a big issue for them who lives in the
countryside
 area. They cover a lot of distance to buy some items like grains, beans, fresh vegetables, fresh fruits, oil and so on. To conclude, After compares so many points in my opinion, I suggest people that live in
city
Suggestion
a city
the city
cities
 is more preferable apart from live in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
. I totally agree with it because, the advantages are more against the disadvantages to live in
city
Suggestion
the city
a city
cities
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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