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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To extend do you agree ?

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People vote and elect their representatives to form a
government
. In return, the
government
 protects its citizen, which is its core responsibility. To protect people, some argue that
government
Suggestion
the government
 has to spend more
budget
 on
defence
. I totally disagree with
this
 statement and argue that
government
 need to spend more on social
security
 schemes.
First
 of all, citizens' safety can be maintained by the
government
 through social
security
 allowances. If the
government
 provides cash assistance to elder, disabled and marginalized people, they can feel safe.
For example
, citizens of the UK feel protected because the UK
government
 spends 30% of its
budget
 on social
security
 allowance. A recent survey reveals that citizens of
this
 country feel much protected than the earlier
government which
Accept comma addition
government, which
 had spent 40% of
budget
 on
defence
 and 10% on people's safety.
Moreover
, at present, it is baseless to increase
budget
 on
defence
 because there is less probability of happening world war 3. In
this
 situation, spending money on armed struggle would be unproductive. Even if the
budget
 is spent on the arm
defence
, people will not feel safe. In my view, budgeting on
defence
 is the preparation of the insurgency.
Therefore
, the
government
 need to ensure safety of the people by spending money on social
security
 allowances rather than on
defence
.
Submitted by bbk.prakash on

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