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success is depend on hard work but others believe that luck has no role how far do you agree or disagree

#success #work #luck #role
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Success
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 means the ability to turn our dreams and goals into the reality, and for that we have to
work
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 hard. In the contemporary era, there is heated argument over the issue
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success
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 is only depends on hard
work
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, but to be an honest
luck
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 has played a vital role to obtain
success
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 in life. A lion's share of the society favours it.
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 the rest goes averse it. The following paragraph would shed light on both the approaches before making final judgement. I do not see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons.
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 and foremost, the
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 achieved by the contribution of both hard
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 and
luck
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. There are some people believe that
success
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 is only in a matter of
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. By
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 implementation of thought they could not
work
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 at all and wait for their
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.
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, people
also
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 create more dependency on the horoscope for engagement in terms of works.
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, check their daily horoscope and pretend that today is a lucky day or not.
This
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 kind of thought directly effect on their capabilities of
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 and
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 feel
demotivate
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 when they faces failures in their life. Adding
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, hard
work
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 is only worked when there is
luck
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 availability to obtain pleasure and
success
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 in life. To substantiate, there is an epitome of a Thomas editions who invented an electric bulb after the failing the 100 times. On the logger's head some critics go against the above discussed assertions. But I am of opinion that we should do a hard
work
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 with positive thinking and approach without consideration of the drawback of failures. There are famous lines about
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, " Don't run for the
success
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, only follow the
excellence
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excelling
excellent
 power of our mind that will runs the
success
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 behind us."

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