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success is depend on hard work but others believe that luck has no role how far do you agree or disagree

#success #work #luck #role
Success
 means the ability to turn our dreams and goals into the reality, and for that we have to
work
 hard. In the contemporary era, there is heated argument over the issue
that is
success
 is only depends on hard
work
, but to be an honest
luck
 has played a vital role to obtain
success
 in life. A lion's share of the society favours it.
However
 the rest goes averse it. The following paragraph would shed light on both the approaches before making final judgement. I do not see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons.
First
 and foremost, the
success
 achieved by the contribution of both hard
work
 and
luck
. There are some people believe that
success
 is only in a matter of
luck
. By
this
 implementation of thought they could not
work
 at all and wait for their
luck
.
Secondly
, people
also
 create more dependency on the horoscope for engagement in terms of works.
For instance
, check their daily horoscope and pretend that today is a lucky day or not.
This
 kind of thought directly effect on their capabilities of
work
 and
also
 feel
demotivate
 when they faces failures in their life. Adding
further
, hard
work
 is only worked when there is
luck
 availability to obtain pleasure and
success
 in life. To substantiate, there is an epitome of a Thomas editions who invented an electric bulb after the failing the 100 times. On the logger's head some critics go against the above discussed assertions. But I am of opinion that we should do a hard
work
 with positive thinking and approach without consideration of the drawback of failures. There are famous lines about
success
, " Don't run for the
success
, only follow the
excellence
Suggestion
excelling
excellent
 power of our mind that will runs the
success
 behind us."

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