The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Personal cars have become essential part of our day-to-day transport life owing to the flexibility and comfort it provides.
However
,
this
luxury comes at a great cost, majority of them ar
e enviro
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the majority
nmental impacts and unbearable traffic congestions. Perhapse, these pro
blems ca
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Perhaps
n be alleviated to some extend if authorities do provide better public transportation. Climate change and its alarming impacts are all over the world and are great concern for n
ot only envir
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a great concern
onmental activists but
also
for common citizens. Air and sound pollution caused by automobiles are primary contributors to the global warming. Carbon dioxide emmitted by vehicle
exhaust
expel (gases or odors)
emitted
s has incresed the green
house ef
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
fects which in turn has aggravated temp
erature rise,
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have aggravated
ecological imbalance and many health problems. It is need of the hour to
fin
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the need
d all possible work-arounds to cou
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rifying results that may come in near future due to ever increasing number of vehicles on the road.
In addition
to the above problem, over use of personal car forms heinous traffic jam that we face every day which is sheer waste of time and productivity. To overcome these adverse effects, many suggests to put sta
ggering
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suggest
high tax
on automobile pur
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a staggering high tax
chase which I believe is not advisable. Reson being, in man
y met
a rational motive for a belief or action
Reason
Reasons
ro cities, cars are rather necessit
y t
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is
han luxu
ry owing
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a necessity
to the long distance travelling. What might help in curbing the situation is, encouring people to
use thei
giving courage or confidence or hope
encouraging
r four-wheelers more smartly. Government should i
mpose rule
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The government
of using cars
only
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rules
if more than two person needs to tra
vel, o
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people
persons
r
offe
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need
r car-pool
otherwise
. Quick ride organization is an excellent example of
such
implementation which operates in Bangalore and around 70% of corporate employees are using it daily to their office commute. While these measures will help with traffic and atmosphere, Government and giant automobile hubs can invest in producing advanced environment-friendly vehicles. To summerize, I would
opine out
give a summary (of)
summarize
that everyone should work towards making car utilization more efficient with lesser side effects to keep enjoying the benefits it has to offer.

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