Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

My name is
sindhu
Suggestion
Sindhu
.I have visited your
restaurant
last
night along with my friend. I am writing
this
letter to complain about the bad hotel services which was provided. I am one of your frequent customers and I am completely disappointed with your hotel
service
. On yesterday evening, myself and my friend had a business meeting in your
restaurant
, since we thought, your
restaurant
is the best in the entire city.
However
, we never imagined the
service
would be too bad like
this
. The waiter was incompetent, and sorry to mention, he was not capable enough to work in a five star rated hotel like yours. The food which was served, did not taste good. Especially, the soup was too bad, we were not even able to have a half of it.I am completely
displessed
not pleased; experiencing or manifesting displeasure
displeased
displaced
dispensed
with the
service
which your
restaurant
provided us
last
night.I have reported the same to the manager yesterday during the incident. I hope you would be taking the
appropiate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
measures for the quality and the
service
provided. I would like to hear from you back for the actions taken.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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