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Some pepple claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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We are living in industrial era where the amount of
waste
 generated from homes has increased and most of the times it is found that it is not recycled. Most people believe that the only way to increase recycling, is by making it compulsory by government. In
this
 essay I would present both sides of the story and
then
 end up by giving my view. With increase in population the amount
waste
 generated by homes is increasing. It is really important to action an against it as if we don't care about our
earth
, the day is not far when our
earth
 will no more left to provide us clean water, food and air to breathe in.I think it is important for citizens to understand their roles towards mother
earth
.
Government
Suggestion
The government
 is trying their best by starting campings like
swach
to so extreme a degree
such
swatch
swash
 Bharat
abhiyan
 where in Prime Minister of our country Mr.Narendra modi is cleaning the street and giving the message if they can why can't others. Recycling is one of smallest step towards saving the
earth
. It is very simple to follow us just off to differentiate the wet and dry
waste
 of our home and keep it into different dust-bin namely green and blue and the rest will be taken care by municipal corporation. I strongly feel that
government
Suggestion
the government
 making a law will help to save
earth
Suggestion
the earth
, as most of the times it is seen that if we tell people they will not listen,
for example
, it
is been
Suggestion
has been
 so many years governments have told to follow proper way of disposing
waste
, but what has happened till now? Nothing has changed. Now
next
 major step which
govement
 can do is to make it a legal requirement.
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