Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.

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Whether people should pay
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tax
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taxes
to the
government
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or not is an argument of great debate. Some people think that it is the
government
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's responsibility to raise
money
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from other sectors and should not take the portion of a person's hard-earned cash while others stand just opposite of
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opinion. I believe if the
government
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spend
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spends
the
money
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for the benefit of the citizen, as it meant to be for every country, and value the mass people's opinions and suggestions how to best use the
money
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,
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there is nothing wrong with the taxpaying method and rather had many positive reasons to do so. Those who are against the
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tax-paying
not exempt from paying taxes
taxpaying
system often opine that the
government
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should never take their hard earning
money
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for the sake of the country's development scheme.
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is especially true for those who earn an amount that barely supports his/her family and who are not satisfied with the public service provided by the
government
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. In many countries, people have to pay a
tax
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of more than a quarter of the total
earning
the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
earnings
of a year and yet do not get basic facilities like treatment, education and they have to spend their own pocket
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for those purposes.
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is very natural that they become angry about
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paying. But the
tax
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, collected from the people of a country can be a great fund to use for their betterment by the
government
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. There are lots of poor people who can be benefited from the
tax
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paid by others. The
government
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can build more roads, offer public services, and can introduce other useful schemes using the
money
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. Almost in most of the countries, people who earn more than a predefined amount have to pay
tax
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and not for those who earn less than that amount. So the
Government
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is not forcing poor people to pay
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tax but
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tax, but
those who can pay
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tax
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taxes
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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