Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In

this

essay I will discuss both views regarding whether or not it is good for parents to give their children mobile phones. I will

furthermore

express my opinion and give explanations.

To begin

with, while mobile phones are necessary in

this

day and age, they may obstruct other daily activities. In my opinion I strongly agree that parents should give their children mobile phones.

Firstly

, in a society heavily reliant on technology, phones have become somewhat of a necessity nowadays.

For example

, parents may rely on phones to ensure the safety of their offspring.

Moreover emergency

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Moreover, emergency

services and many other services function mainly through digital technology and

thus

not having a phone may be problematic.

Subsequently

a child may find it difficult to obtain assistance if required.

In addition

, the phones are

also

looked at as a social necessity.

For instance

, children without phones may appear unpopular or get bullied.

Therefore having

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Therefore, having

a phone can be argued to be a must. In my opinion, I strongly agree that children should have phones,.

In contrast

, others may argue that mobile phones may obstruct other valued activities. To illustrate

this

, an example would be a child spending many hours on their phones as opposed to working out.

Therefore

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Therefore, this

this

means that the child may suffer in other aspects and

as a result

achieve poor results.

Also

education may be reduced as well as some outdoor activities. So while phones are useful for some things they may actually be detrimental. I would argue,

however that parents

Suggestion

however, that parents

should control the usage hours of mobile phones by their children. In conclusion, phones are needed for many services, but may lead to other consequences. It is clear,

however

, that even though there are valid arguments as to where or not parents should give their children mobile phones, that their monitored use is beneficial. It is recommended that parents give their children mobile phones.