Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programme (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education plays a very important role in the lives of people. Some people are of the opinion that unpaid

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services should be made compulsory for

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students. In my opinion, the advantages of adding unpaid society assistance to the institute curriculum outweigh the drawbacks, if any. Children have very impressionable minds and institute programs should be designed in

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a way that they will ensure the overall development of the child. Dignity of labour is an essential topic

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covered in the

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curriculum, but it is better understood when children actually engage in various forms of labour.

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, when students are made to do

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like cleaning up a park every Friday, it instills in them respect for the person doing that job and

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a greater awareness that littering is a bad habit. Some people will argue that a child should not be put through these kinds of experiences as they should be made to aspire for greater things in life by working really hard in

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, they should spend more time studying. I believe if the importance of serving the society is instilled in the children from a very early age, they will grow up to become a much more socially aware and socially responsible person.

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, in the Japanese education system, special emphasis is given to

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, though many people do not understand why it is necessary.

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, the purpose of

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became clear during the recently concluded football World Cup in Russia.

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the Japanese team lost the semifinal match they won the hearts of many people with the assistance they provided by cleaning up the stands of a foreign country. In conclusion, the advantages of mandatory

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outweigh any disadvantages associated with it. After studying the pros and cons, I am convinced that

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helps the overall development of the child and

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the nation.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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