The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
The pie charts and table
illustrates
data Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
of
the total value and countries (Change preposition
on
canada
, china, others) of fish imported to the US over 3 different years 1988, 1992 and 2000.
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Canada
Overall
, the total value in billions of dollars had an
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apply
increase
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increased
of
nearly Change preposition
apply
double
over the period given. Canada had a decrease Wrong verb form
doubled
while
china had a dramatic growth. The fish importations
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imports
of
other countries fluctuated.
The total value started at 6.57 Change preposition
from
billions
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billion
of
dollars in 1988 and it had a slight increase in 1992 with 8.52 Change preposition
apply
whereas
the last
year it stood at 10.72.
The fish
importation to the US from Canada had the biggest percentage with 60% in 1988 and it dropped to 34% in 1992 followed by a decline to 28% in 2000. China started Correct article usage
Fish
with
13% and it proceeded to rise to 30% in the final year. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, the proportion of imports relatively grew from 27% in 1988 to 42% in 2000 with it's
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its
largest
majority of 46% in 1992.Add an article
the largest
a largest
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