The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

The provided chart illustrates the survey result of 100,000 UK residents to find the countries they visit overseas from 1994 to 1998.
Besides
, different purposes of travel at the same period are clearly shown in the table above. Overall, as is observed from the given
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graph
graphs
, most of
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the people
people
who took the survey went aboard for
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the holiday
a holiday
holiday
and Western Europe was their most favourite
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destinations
destination
.
Initially
, in 1994, more than 22,000 UK citizens visited foreign countries and among them, there were around 15,000 people went on their holidays. Fewer number of people travelled to other countries for business trip or for
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a friend
friends
friend
and relative meeting, about 3,000 and 2,600 respectively. A year later, in 1995, there was a slight drop in international travel of the UK residents. In the following years,
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the total number
total number
of oversea goers
at a steady rate or pace
steadily
steadly
increased and reached the peak of approximately 29,000 in 1998. They still remained a tendency to travel for holidays rather than other purposes, which accounted for around 21,000 people in the same year. Whereas people gradually became more interested in going overseas, Western Europe was the best option over the period. It welcomed about 18,000 out of 22,000 and 24,000 out of 29,000 UK visitor in 1995 and in 1998, respectively. Despite of a stable growth in
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the number
thenumber
of travellers number, North America and other areas are
too small or unimportant to merit attention
inconsiderable
unconsiderable
destinations compared to that of their
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counterparts
counterpart
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.
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