When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and the ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

Entertaining international events became a popular trend since the
century. I believe that these events are crucial, and might ease tensions between
countries that do not have normal diplomatic relations. They are
beneficial in terms of relieving patriotic affection in an innocuous way. In
essay, I will explore the rationale for my own viewpoint on the matter. Major sport international events like Olympic games and World Cup Football have always aimed to entertain people. In
regard, every four years, many different nations
matches with each other in a friendly manner in
tournaments. It happens sometimes that
two countries
the two countries
do not have normal diplomatic
relations but
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relations, but
the teams of these
countries played with each other and showed high fraternity in the match,
for instance
in World Cup 1998, the United States had to play against Iran despite the fact that the
countries did not have diplomatic relations;
however, the both
however, both the
teams could alleviate the tensions between their countries. In
global era, the nationalism is not as strong as one hundred years ago, but still there are a few occasions
as universal sport competitions that the people who support their
in the championships could release patriotic feelings safely and no one could get hurt. On the personal scale,
might helpful for their health. Sometimes these feelings encourage supporters to invent new ways by creating some creative motions of supporting that might give the
stadium nice
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stadium, nice
views and motions with their own unique motions
moving hands of one
turn it to
other side
the other side
. In sum, I maintain that the global athletic events have both national and personal
. In the future, I hope that sports’ audiences find more creative ways to support their country team. Or governments around the world try to have more athletic events.
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