Some people think is to produce happier society is to ensure that there is only a small difference on the earning on the richest and poorest member?

However
, certain advancements in technology are not affordable for the poorer sections of society. Modern medicine,
for example
, is expensive. There are many new drugs and diagnostic procedures which are very costly. Certain affluent people who developed cancer took treatment with a special kind of protein, which is very expensive, but had fewer side effects compared to conventional chemotherapy. Rich people can access these treatments by spending only a small portion of their income and improve their health. Poor people,
on the other hand
, have to spend all of their money on conventional treatments and yet there is no guarantee that the condition will improve. In conclusion, even though innovations in technology decrease the gap between rich and poor, while certain developments make society more polarized. It is an optimistic move that all technologies will be available to every person regardless of their economic status.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users