In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
The issue of whether or not the children should be engaged in some paid work has sparked a heated debate. People have already differed around it. Some argue that having some employment experience is conducive to the child's learning and development.
However
, I believe that youngsters have to enjoy their time Linking Words
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essay will deal with my viewpoint on the matter and opposing views to reach the most proper concept.
On the one hand, I firmly believe that minors should stay away from working. There are many reasons, the most obvious one is that youths must spend their time in education, and explore a new nation by travelling abroad. Linking Words
Furthermore
, learn a new language to be able to acquire a job in a multinational organization that requires a bilingual candidate. Linking Words
For instance
, adolescents can utilize their spare time in learning new skills, like communication and negotiation skills, Linking Words
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of working.
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On the other hand
, a group of people argue that children should work because they will gain more experience and skills from an early age for the following reasons. Linking Words
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, youths will be reliable and have the ability to be more responsible. Linking Words
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, they will gain much money to be able to cover their basic need and carry the money for their future. Linking Words
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, if young people acquire a job at an early age, they will have advantages over their colleagues.
To summarize, even though both concepts seem convincing, as each one of them has its own rationale. Yet, I strongly agree with the Linking Words
last
opinion, which states that children must not get a job at a very early young age, for the previously mentioned reasons.Linking Words
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