Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?
Health
is an imperative aspect of a person’s life. In a recent study, medical practitioners have mentioned that the current lifestyle of Use synonyms
people
does not include physical workouts. Use synonyms
People
are more inclined towards Use synonyms
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the
sedentary lifestyle. Correct article usage
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overworking and technology habits may lead to serious Correct word choice
how
health
problems that should be taken into consideration. The main reason for unhealthy Use synonyms
habit
is the influence of technology on all aspects of life. Compared with the past time humans getting more and more lazy Fix the agreement mistake
habits
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. The vast majority of Fix the agreement mistake
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people
do not often go outside and satisfy Use synonyms
needs
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their needs
For instance
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prefer
stay at home and do shopping online. Add the particle
prefer to
Additionally
, all new building has provided elevators, which Linking Words
people
prefer to take Use synonyms
instead
of climbing stairs. Linking Words
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, the usage of the car is preferred more in comparison to walking or cycling to work. AfterLinking Words
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people
get exhausted and do not have enough energy to do sport. The sedentary lifestyle is leading Use synonyms
people
towards wrong choices which have an adverse effect in the long term. The government should implement Use synonyms
health
awareness in offices and schools. Introducing Use synonyms
gym
in offices can be another way to ensure staff Correct article usage
a gym
participating
in routine physical exercise. Organising Wrong verb form
participate
sport
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health
. Use synonyms
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, Linking Words
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well being
is vital for a long life and everyone should pursueAdd a hyphen
well-being
the
mobile way of living. Correct article usage
a
Current
population need to understand the consequences of not doing active exercise regularly.Correct article usage
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