Some people think its ok to benefit from animals, while others think they should not be exploited. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There is an ongoing debate regarding
the act of making some area of land or water more profitable or productive or useful
exploitation
exploition
of animals.Many individuals believe that animals should be utilised by humans in various activities.
In contrast
, other people
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think
thinks
that it is wrong to take animals for granted.
Therefore
, before commenting on my view,
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I
i
would like to delve into both the aspects with
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relevant examples
a relevant example
relevant example
. To commence with,
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the various needs
various needs
of humans are fulfilled by the
of or relating to or characteristic of Mali or its people
Malians
mammalian
mamlians
.In daily life people uses many animal products
such
as milk, beef, meet
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,
,
egg
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,
,
it's skin layer as a
an animal skin made smooth and flexible by removing the hair and then tanning
leather
lather
material, using camels
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,
,
horses and
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donkeys
donkies
as a
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transporter
transporters
, cows in the field of
a large-scale farming enterprise
agriculture
agricultural
aggriculture
.
Furthermore
, utilization of
this
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thing
things
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is
are
necessary for the humans to
continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
servive
on
this
planet without them survivals for
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humans
humns
is not possible.
On the other hand
, in various
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fields, animals
fields animals
folds animals
Fields animals
filds animals
are taken for granted. Researches and
a workplace for the conduct of scientific research
laboratories
laboretories
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use
uses
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
animlas
for trials and testing for their experiments.
Moreover
, techniques used by them are very painful and sometimes its leads to even death.
In addition
to
this
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,
,
many times humans abuse them for fun
any specific behavior
activities
activites
or for their satisfaction.
For instance
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,
,
in the past time kings of the various kingdoms are more keen to go fore a hunting in their leisure time, or collects
the kind and number and arrangement of teeth (collectively) in a person or animal
teeth
that
theeth
of
five-toed pachyderm
elephants
eliphants
or even
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the skin
skin
of the tigers. To summarise and give my opinion on
this
notion,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
personally think that it would be good as long as
the quality of being humane
humanity
huminty
do not involve
an event that causes someone to die
killing
lilling
of the species and to make it more safe government should make some
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amend as
amendas
and rules to prevent
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
animlas
from abuse.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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