Some people think its ok to benefit from animals, while others think they should not be exploited. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There is an ongoing debate regarding exploitation of animals.Many individuals believe that animals should be utilised by humans in various activities.
In contrast
, other people think that it is wrong to take animals for granted.
Therefore
, before commenting on my view, I would like to delve into both the aspects with relevant examples. To commence with, the various needs of humans are fulfilled by the mammalian.In daily life people uses many animal products like milk, beef, meat, egg, it's skin layer as a leather material, using camels
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horses and donkeys as a transporter, cows in the field of agriculture.
Furthermore
, utilization of these things is necessary for the humans to survive on
this
planet without them survivals for humans is not possible.
On the other hand
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,
,
in various fields, animals are taken for granted. Researches and laboratories use animals for trials and testing for their experiments.
Moreover
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,
techniques used by them are very painful and sometimes its leads to even death.
In addition
to
this
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many times humans abuse them for fun activities or for their satisfaction.
For instance
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,
,
in the past time kings of the various kingdoms are more keen to go fore a hunting in their leisure time, or collects teeth of elephants or even the skin of the tigers. To summarise and give my opinion on these
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notions
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, I personally think that it would be good as long as humanity do not involve killing of the species and to make it more safe government should make some
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amend as
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and rules to prevent animals from abuse.

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