Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of an individual is in their own hands. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This
essay will discuss about
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a free health care system
free health care system
free healthcare system
is needful or not. Most people think the healthcare must be not expensive because
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everyone
eceryone
has the right to live healthy. There is a Mongolian wisdom "The illness came
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from
by
wind suddenly, not
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obvious
obviously
" If people
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had known
had know
they had
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a serious ailment base
serious ailment base
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earlier
early
, they would definitely take care themselves. But 80 percent of the world population does not have sufficient chance to protect from illness.
However
person has
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a great wish
great wish
to live happily, if he/she is sick it is almost impossible. There
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is
are
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a great amount
great amount
of people who die,
as a result
of
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insufficient
unsufficient
money. On condition that hospitals do not take any fee, people will see their symptoms early and cured easily. So the proportion of heavy sick people would be decreased. On the other side many small and undeveloped countries have not enough money to run free hospitals. They earn money to buy hospital equipment and doctors` salary from
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the air
theair
patients.
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Also, people
Also people
must be responsible to
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the air
theair
own health and lives. It is not fair to waste population`s tax to another one.
In
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addition, there
addition there
is chance to happen strike whether Healthcare provided for free to everyone. Another reason is the earth is hard to exist when there
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are
ara
as many as people. In
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conclusion
conciliation
consolation
conclution
, Healthcare should be provided free regardless of a person`s tax.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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