It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that
wildlife
is an essential part of our ecosystem on which we are all dependent and play a vital part in our
life
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lives
. While some people believe that
wildlife
protection needs
good
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better
funding and prior attention
from
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of
government, but I completely disagree because there is
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
major problem in our environment which are knocking our door for attention.
Firstly
, Global warming is one of the most important issues which need immediate attention from the central governments of all the countries. Climate change is occurring
that is
affecting human and animal life throughout the earth.
For instance
, glaciers in Antarctica have been started melting at a fast pace for which we human and our lifestyle
is
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are
responsible for that. Glaciers are the main source of our drinking water and we rely on them to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
our daily and future needs for water. Government
need
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needs
to make a plan to save the glaciers without worrying about the money involved in
this
task. Another
pollution which
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pollution, which
is creating more trouble than saving
wildlife
is water pollutions. Various
kind
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kinds
of chemical and oil industries disposing there hazard waste directly into the rivers which we will use for drinking. If
this
continue
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continues
to
happen we
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happen, we
will soon begin to have very serious or deadly medical conditions. Government needs to stop
these
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this
as soon as possible. They should provide a solution to these companies to dispose
there
of them or themselves
their
waste at a
dumpsites
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dumpsite
dump sites
which is far from the cities. They should invest in
recycle
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recycling
or decomposing plants which will take care of these wastes and make the cities cleaner and
green
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greener
.
in
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In
my opinion,
although
wildlife
projects are
also
important to save endangered animals and birds and unfortunately we have other major issues
also
prior to
this
to save all the mankind and animals.

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