It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is crucial for all metropolitan cities and towns to have some recreational facilities like parks and squares because of their numerous benefits. A number of arguments surround my opinion
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and I will discuss it in
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the upcoming paragraphs
upcoming paragraphs
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first
and the foremost merit is that it is beneficial for the health of people because in morning time they can go for walking as well as in the evenings,
also
older people can spend their free time with their loved ones
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and they can discuss about their daily happenings.
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, young people do
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a lot
lots
lot
of exercise in parks and gardens to keep their health fit and healthy
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otherwise
if there is no park they glue with electronic gadgets like mobile phones and computers and many more.
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, little children get best place to play, they play with their friends in parks if any garden or square is not available for kids
then
they use roads and streets for playing it can lead to serious incidents.
Moreover
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parks have some educational value too
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in schools
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students learn about
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environmental
environment
protection in their studies and teachers can take their pupils to parks because students can see those pictures so lively which they see in their
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schoolbooks
school books
and they know about
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the importance
importance
and protection of
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
tress
and flowers. In recapitulate, parks holds immense importance regarding education, health for people
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every society
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so government should build parks in every city and town.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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