The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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health

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public

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the public

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has been

always a

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open to doubt or debate

debatable

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become

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a serious concern

serious concern

serious concerns

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so many factor

effect

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effects

like the people 's life style,

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an established custom

habit

habits

, working style and so on.So

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am strongly agree

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strongly agree

with people's

health

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will

going

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down in the

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of all, the main two

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reasons

behind it are technology and

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fast food

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a new gadget

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the new gadget

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lots

of their time on it and the result of it bad

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normal use of the faculty of vision

eyesight

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a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something

interest

interested

in playing outdoor sport so they become less active and weak.

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make impact of the eating pattern.

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in many big

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organizations

most of

employes

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employees

are working and living in sitting life style so it

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in addition

also

effect on their

health

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future

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.In

addtion people

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addition, people

addition people

are prefer

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ready made

fastfood

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fast food

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they are not learning the cooking skill. It will not only make the impact in their own

life but

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life, but

whole family 's

health

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will come

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into

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danger

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, many people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that technology will help the improving the

health

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of people.Because the many

company

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companies

develop the fitness app and gadget it may improve the

health

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future

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the future

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opnion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

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this types

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these types

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then

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am sure it will impact very highly on public 's

health

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future

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. So we all have

take

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taken

care about

over use

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the overuse

overuse

of technology and prefer home made food.

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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