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Some people think studying from the past offers no benefits to today’s life, while others believe history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that learning from the past will give us no benefits at
present time
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the present time
 while others think that history is an important source of information to us.
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 my opinion learning from the past will help us change our lives and our thinking. There are some theories from
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the past
 which have been proved wrong.
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 at the beginning of the world humans were apes and we have evolved over times it has proved incorrect reading
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 history will gives us no benefits In order to become a successful person
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 you need to understand how the world has evolved there were many great peoples in the past who still teaches us guide is by their extraordinary knowledge the law ans orders that we follow now taken from the past
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