Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern's time, there are two different opinions, one of which is that the government should spend amounts of budget in education for students and teenagers, the other which is that constructing of entertainment building is more worthwhile than anything. But I personally believe that if the authority

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more sport centres, the more citizens can feel

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place, nowadays, it is easy to find on broadcast via the Internet or television that a lot of elderly and 20's to 40's people have complained that there is not enough place where people can unwind their stress or tiredness. According to a recent survey, people normally prone to release their stress to watching movies just lying on the bed or playing the computer games. It naturally leads to deteriorating not only people's physical health problems, but

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these people are highly likely to get the depression. So, making a variety of sport centres or community buildings about exercising purpose is imperative for their public. Another point worth mentioning is that if there are many facilities of improving health of people, nation's economic growth would be increased in the sense that people are becoming active and enthusiastic. To explain in detail, the people spending a lot of time exercising are

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to leave their house out and enjoy many activities so that they spend their money on the market compared with those people spending a lot of time staying at home, and purchase some apparatus of requiring their exercise. So, if the government should erect diverse theme entertainment buildings, people are becoming more outgoing and can be healed their mental diseases by connecting with members of a

sport

the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities

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the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

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. In conclusion, it is still disputable which is the critical way to invest the nation of revenue in groups of having different disposition. But, I am firmly convinced that the nation should pour an amount of money into the recreation building rather than teach students in that the healthy cannot alter anything.