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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
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The given illustration represents timberlands in million hectares in various types of the earth.
According to
 the information forest area
of
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in
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 Asia and Europe increased,
while
this
 indicator in other continents significantly declined.  As
it
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apply
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can be seen in the figure Africa's woodlands in hectares occupied 749 millionth ha in 1990, after a
15 year
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15-year
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 decline and maintained 691.
In addition
, in South America
trees
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tree
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initially
 covered 946000000 ha, after decreasing by 42000000 ha
at the end
fallen
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falling
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 to 882000000 ha in 1990, 2000 and 2005 respectively. It is noticed that the lowest hectare area of forest had Oceania with 199000000 ha land in 1990 and almost remain constant after 15 years,
however
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 Europe's wooden lands hectares reached the highest point and made up 1001000000 ha in 2005. As the table suggests, Asia's wooden grounds had
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significantly
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uplift
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uplifted
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 and possessed 584000000 ha in 2005.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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