Some people believe that written communication is much less powerful than face to face interaction when it comes to conveying a message. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemant?

It is argued by some people that written interaction is much less robust than
person
to
person
communication
, while others claim that written interaction is more powerful to transmit a topic. On the one hand,
face
to
face
communication
can be the most easy and efficient
way
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of
to
conveying a
message
because
this
way
is a natural
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behviour
. People have used their
body
languages since he/she was born. According to
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Professor
Professors
Proffessor
Kane Witson, manager of
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the neurology department
neurology department
at Cambridge University, people have some
language
all over the
world
,
this
language
is
body
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
langueage
. If a
person
lives in Germany
make available or accessible, provide or furnish
offered
afford
afriad
something, it will give a same reaction as a
person
living in Africa or other places. Because
an almond-shaped neural structure in the anterior part of the temporal lobe of the cerebrum; intimately connected with the hypothalamus and the hippocampus and the cingulate gyrus; as part of the limbic system it plays an important role in motivation and emotional behavior
amygdala
amigdala
, a part of our brain, controls our attitudes when people are in danger or when they are happy so that all people give same
body
reactions to
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the same situations
same situations
and
this
communication
style
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
doesn
’ need words for understanding others. As can be predicted,
face
to
face
communication
can be most efficient and easy
way
to transmit our
message
to other persons due to
body
language
.
In addition
, sometimes, we need to ask
an instance of questioning
questions
quiestion
about
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speaking
spoken
topics so that many multinational companies spent a lot money to organize meetings.
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Participants
Participiants
can discuss topics and they can create new ideas at
this
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meeting
meetings
. To demonstrate, in Amazon, the most profitable company in the Earth,
this
company spent 200 million USD for organizing meetings because people can easily ask and discuss about problems with their colleagues. If the mailing is adequate for
communication
, they would not spend mass money for
face
to
face
communication
style.
On the other hand
, sometimes, we cannot remember
one or some or every or all without specification
any
some
knowledges. If we don’t take
this
information by mail or letters, we would not find them, in case
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writing, communication
writing communication
writting
communication
is the very useful
way
to transmit information to others due to
capable of being steered or directed
steerable
storeable
type. To illustrate, in Turkey, researchers found a place.
This
place’s name is Gobeklitepe.
This
area was built
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in
at
20.000 years ago.
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Surprisingly
Suprisingly
, researchers found some pictures on the walls.
This
Picture includes milky
way
and
in the area or vicinity
around
a round
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the world
world
.With
this
message
from the previous generations, we can understand
in the area or vicinity
around
a round
world
theory had been known before we knew. Without doubt,
this
knowledge can be changed our history. If previous people didn’t write or
cause friction
scratch
sketch
skretch
, we would not learn their life and their knowledge levels.
In addition
, we can organize our
world
before we send our
message
to people.
This
message
can be very understandable and reach a lot of people. To demonstrate, Donald Trump, president of
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the USA
USA
, prefer to share his
message
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to
with
Twitter. Twitter is a very reliable
communication
platform all over the
world
and it has billions of users. Donald Trump can easily inform others with his tweets. He can affect other governments’ economies with his messages. Unfortunately, he can use twitter like as a powerful weapon. In conclusion,
face
to
face
communication
is more robust than written
communication
because without
body
language
,
communication
is not efficient and understandable.
Furthermore
, we can discover
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the history
history
without pictures or written documents. In
this
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day
days
, technology is skyrocketing, we can
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
analyze
historical items or bones and we can learn full of information about our history. Without doubt, Donald Trump
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prefers
prefer
to written
communication
because he doesn’t use their
body
language
Accept space
,
,
very well.

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