With the help of internet and television many people are becoming famous. is it a positive and negative trend?

It is true that television and especially the internet have made it possible for an everyday
person
to become a celebrity much more easily in the past. 
However
,
this
phenomenon has
also
created a situation where
this
can lead to a regular, innocent
person
having their life devastated.
Therefore
, it seems that despite the positive aspects of
this
development, the negative effects are more apparent. One the one hand, the ability to become popular through digital media obviously leads to the opportunity to become rich and famous. In the past,
this
was controlled by film studio executives and record labels, but now a typical
person
can become a star simply by word of mouth.
For example
, many popular
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YouTube
Youtube
stars became famous and wealthy simply by their fans sharing their content and
then
things snowballed from there.
On the other hand
, the dark side of
this
ease of access to fame is that it can lead to infamy for a
person
who maybe did not do much to deserve it. For every example of a new star emerging from the internet or a TV talent show, there are myriad more instances of K-pop stars who have been harassed and had their lives ruined because of public scrutiny.
Furthermore
,
this
can arise when someone is completely innocent,
such
as in the case of online bullying, or even when someone seeks out attention but is ruthlessly mocked for trying to do something creative. Inclusion
Accept space
,
,
an increase in the ability for people to express themselves and their creativity is a desirable thing in general.
However
, in reality the opportunity to become popular is
also
the opportunity to become popular for the wrong reasons.

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