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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As we all know, children are the future.
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therefore
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Therefore
, there are some
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
essentials
 skills kids should know how to dominate. Nowadays, people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that is
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 useless teaching children the art of handwriting. Taking into account that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 agree with the statement, In
this
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 essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will express my point of view on
favor
promote over another
favour
 and against
this
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 argument.
First
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 of all, there has been a huge
inovation
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
 in
technologic
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
.
Therefore
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, some practices that are handmade have been replaced. Currently, the amount of individuals that still write handmade letters have reduced. Everyone works with email, and there are only advantages
on
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of
in
to
for
 using
this
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 platform.
Its
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It's
 much easier and quicker writing
a
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an
 email rather than a letter. So teaching kids some handwriting
teckniques
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
technique
 is kind of pointless.
On the other hand
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, there are still some business that
have
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has
a
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an
 old school style and
dont
do not
don't
 want to adapt to the changes that are
occuring
come to pass
occurring
. So they prefer using letters rather than sending
a
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an
 email.
Therefore
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, having the ability to write a letter with a perfect
handletter
the shaped bar used to steer a bicycle
handlebar
 is important.
Also
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, it might
occure
come to pass
occur
acquire
some
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
 situation in the future where having a nice handwriting is essential. To summarize, in my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think it´s not essential to teach kids some skills to have a perfect handwriting.
Nevertheless
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, in some
ocasions
something you have to do
occasions
occasion
 it might be
importante
of great significance or value
important
 have
such
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tecknique
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
techniques
technique
.
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