Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As we all know, children are the future.
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Therefore
therefore
, there are some
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
essentials
essencial
skills kids should know how to dominate. Nowadays, people
accept as true; take to be true
believe
belive
that is
useless teaching children the art of handwriting. Taking into account that
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I
i
agree with the statement, In
this
essay
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I
i
will express my point of view on
promote over another
favour
favor
and against
this
argument.
First
of all, there has been a huge
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
inovation
in
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologic
.
Therefore
, some practices that are handmade have been replaced. Currently, the amount of individuals that still write handmade letters have reduced. Everyone works with email, and there are only advantages
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of
in
to
for
on
using
this
platform.
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It's
Its
much easier and quicker writing
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an
a
email rather than a letter. So teaching kids some handwriting
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
technique
teckniques
is kind of pointless.
On the other hand
, there are still some business that
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has
have
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an
a
old school style and
do not
don't
dont
want to adapt to the changes that are
come to pass
occurring
occuring
. So they prefer using letters rather than sending
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an
a
email.
Therefore
, having the ability to write a letter with a perfect
the shaped bar used to steer a bicycle
handlebar
handletter
is important.
Also
, it might
come to pass
occur
acquire
occure
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
some
situation in the future where having a nice handwriting is essential. To summarize, in my opinion,
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I
i
think it´s not essential to teach kids some skills to have a perfect handwriting.
Nevertheless
, in some
something you have to do
occasions
occasion
ocasions
it might be
of great significance or value
important
importante
have
such
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
techniques
technique
tecknique
.

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