Some peopre beft:eve lhey should keep oll the money they hove eorned ond should nol poy lox lo lhe sfofe. Do you ogree or disogree?

I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay taxes to the state. The
government
runs the
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Country
country
from the taxes it collects. Taxes are collected only from those who earn above a certain minimum
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Limit
limit
.
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The lot
Lot
Light
Lt
lt
is our moral duty to pay taxes.
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The tax money
Tax money
collected by
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the government
government
is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens
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And
and
for
government
administration and projects, running of jails and
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
defense
system, and many
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
other
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Operations
operations
.
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The lot
Lot
Lt
lt
is not wrong to say that "taxes run a
country
."
Thus
, it is very important for a
government
to
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Make
make
people pay taxes. Let us
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
analyze
why people do not want to pay taxes. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with
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Government
government
in serving them. They blame
government
for things like lack of infrastructure, poverty and
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Unemployment
unemployment
, but they are not completely wrong as
tax
revenue is misused in some or the other way in
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Every
every
country
.
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In
On
Ln
ln
developed countries,
however
, because of higher satisfaction from
government
's
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Functioning
functioning
, citizens may be more willing to pay taxes. Another factor generating dissatisfaction is the
tax
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Structure
structure
itself. Often the
tax
system is complex and it drives people away from paying taxes.
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Lot
Lt
lt
is
also
felt
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That
that
the
tax
rates are high and
tax
slabs are unequal. So they feel it is not unethical if one goes for
tax
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Avoidance
avoidance
or
tax
evasion. Not paying taxes can drastically affect a
country
's revenue generation, my own
country
,
port city on Atlantic coast; the capital and largest city of Angola
Luanda
lndia
, for that
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Matter
matter
. But
then
, it is equally desired that
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the government
government
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comes
come
up with a fair
tax
structure and
also
make
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People
people
aware where the taxes are being diverted. Even lowering the
tax
rates can help a
country
increase
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Its
its
tax
collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers.
Tax
reform should
also
be fast so
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That
that
no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long. A proper
tax
system backed up with strict
tax
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Laws
laws
can produce the best results. Summing up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that it is the duty of every citizen to pay
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taxes
tax
and the duty of
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Every
every
government
to use it appropriately in
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the public interest
public interest
.

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