You work for an international company, and you would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr. Peters, I am writing to let you know about my interest in joining our head office located in St. Nazaire, France. With our recent acquisition of a new construction project in Nantes, France, I would like to lead the
team
there, working alongside our client for the
next
six months.
This
will provide me and my
team
, more clear and concise requirements on what the client is looking for.
This
will help us in providing more accurate output, which are i
Suggestion
in line
nline
with our client requirements. While the existing
team
members in our present office are capable enough of looking after the daily
team
activities here, I
also
have delegated the work amongst them.
Also
, a work plan is already in place for them to follow u
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up on
pon.
I will have periodic meetings with the
team
here from France to ensure there is no slippage in turn around time. I request you to consider
this
temporary transfer and approve it at the earliest. I would
also
appreciate your assistance in providing me the necessary approvals required for
this
transfer. It will
also
be really helpful if you could inform the
team
there in St. Nazaire about my arrival. Awaiting a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Osama Raj Mohamed

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