You work for an international company, and you would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Peters, I am writing to let you know about my interest in joining our head office located in St. Nazaire, France. With our recent acquisition of a new construction project in Nantes, France, I would like to lead the
there, working alongside our client for the
six months.
will provide me and my
, more clear and concise requirements on what the client is looking for.
will help us in providing more accurate output, which
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with our client requirements. While the existing
members in our present office are capable enough of looking after the daily
activities here, I
have delegated the work amongst them.
, a work plan is already in place for them to follow upon. I will have periodic meetings with the
here from France to ensure there is no slippage in
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time. I request you to consider
temporary transfer and approve it at the earliest. I would
appreciate your assistance in providing me
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necessary approvals required for
transfer. It will
be really helpful if you could inform the
there in St. Nazaire about my arrival. Awaiting a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Osama Raj Mohamed
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