At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, it seems that some of the countries have the
population
of middle age people more than older people.
I think this
brings more advantages than disadvantages, because young adults mean work force
for a country
. For example
Turkey, one of the countries which have younger population
, have a significant work
the force of workers available
workforce
force
. Significantly, these young people getting more educational individuals and they improve the country
in a variety of ways. Turkey is a developing country
, but it is still a third
world country
and young population
make it stronger with new kind
of occupations. Suggestion
a new kind
new kinds
For instance
, artificial intelligence technology has been produced and has being
developed. have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
By contrast
, if there will be built a construction it may be easy to find people who are qualified in this
sector and the construction can be finished in a short while. These are important points for a country
to have self- confidence about improvement.
On the other hand
, young adults can be an army force
for a country
. To illustrate, China, the most crowded country
in the world, has an important land power as an army because there is a big crowd includes a significant number of young people. By this
way, a country
can threat
any other countries that are dangerous. The youth can be more attractive, energetic and can be faster than older people, so it is a practical way to move with these people as an army something considered choice to eat
treat
force
. If there will be an attack to China, the youth of Chinese
Suggestion
the Chinese population
population
can give a hard response to the attack. It is advantageous for China to have them to protect the country
.
In conclusion, for a country
and for the world, the youth is important for improvement and to use as a force
. It can be said that the younger
people the more improvement and confidence.Suggestion
the young
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