At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, it seems that some of the countries have the
population
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of middle age people more than older people. I think
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brings more advantages than disadvantages, because young adults mean work
force
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for a
country
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.
For example
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Turkey, one of the countries which have younger
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, have a significant
work
the force of workers available
workforce
force
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. Significantly, these young people getting more educational individuals and they improve the
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in a variety of ways. Turkey is a developing
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, but it is still a
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world
country
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and young
population
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make it stronger with
new kind
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a new kind
new kinds
of occupations.
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, artificial intelligence technology has been produced and has
being
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been
developed.
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, if there will be built a construction it may be easy to find people who are qualified in
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sector and the construction can be finished in a short while. These are important points for a
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to have self- confidence about improvement.
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, young adults can be an army
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for a
country
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. To illustrate, China, the most crowded
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in the world, has an important land power as an army because there is a big crowd includes a significant number of young people. By
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way, a
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can
threat
something considered choice to eat
treat
any other countries that are dangerous. The youth can be more attractive, energetic and can be faster than older people, so it is a practical way to move with these people as an army
force
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. If there will be an attack to China, the youth of
Chinese
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the Chinese population
population
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can give a hard response to the attack. It is advantageous for China to have them to protect the
country
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. In conclusion, for a
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and for the world, the youth is important for improvement and to use as a
force
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. It can be said that
the younger
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the young
people the more improvement and confidence.
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  • productivity
  • innovation
  • skilled labor
  • social development
  • technology
  • dividend
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