At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, it seems that some of the countries have the
populationof middle age people more than older people. I think
thisbrings more advantages than disadvantages, because young adults mean work
For exampleTurkey, one of the countries which have younger
population, have a significant
the force of workers available
force. Significantly, these young people getting more educational individuals and they improve the
countryin a variety of ways. Turkey is a developing
country, but it is still a
populationmake it stronger with
new kindof occupations.
a new kind
For instance, artificial intelligence technology has been produced and has
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
By contrast, if there will be built a construction it may be easy to find people who are qualified in
thissector and the construction can be finished in a short while. These are important points for a
countryto have self- confidence about improvement.
On the other hand, young adults can be an army
country. To illustrate, China, the most crowded
countryin the world, has an important land power as an army because there is a big crowd includes a significant number of young people. By
threatany other countries that are dangerous. The youth can be more attractive, energetic and can be faster than older people, so it is a practical way to move with these people as an army
something considered choice to eat
force. If there will be an attack to China, the youth of
the Chinese population
populationcan give a hard response to the attack. It is advantageous for China to have them to protect the
country. In conclusion, for a
countryand for the world, the youth is important for improvement and to use as a
force. It can be said that
the youngerpeople the more improvement and confidence.
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