Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Usage of technology has gone to greater heights nowadays by the children for their studies and enhancement of knowledge, which includes usage of smartphones and tablets

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. We used to carry heavy

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is not the case nowadays. A

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course material is now available in the form of e-books or e-lectures, and a tablet or smartphone has the capacity of storing hundreds of books at the same time.

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gives the children the choice for selecting from a wide range of books and study material available or stored in their device.

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gives them a choice of re-watching the lectures, learning through visual aids or videos that are available on different websites,

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enhancing and increasing their learning curve.

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view is not shared by all, in

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people believe that

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is contributing towards the

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of children negatively. Since they may be using the electronic devices excessively and for purposes other than studies.

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may include games, entertainment, restricted websites, etc.

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believe that

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contributes negatively towards their health since they spend more time sitting and using these devices,

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of doing sports and physical activities.

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may not be the case since we have filters and controlling measures available in the electronic devices which enables the parents,

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what and when their child or student is using a smartphone or tablet. In conclusion, the advantages of

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the use

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for learning overweigh the disadvantages,

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we should not discourage it. But we should manage a perfect mix between the use of technology along with the physical

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of the children to ensure their healthy growth.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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