Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Usage of technology has gone to greater heights nowadays by the children for their studies and enhancement of knowledge, which includes usage of smartphones and tablets
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Some people believe that
this
is a
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disadvantage, but
disadvantage but
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I
i
think
otherwise
. We used to carry heavy
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school bags
schoolbags
while we studied during our
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school bags
schoolbags
.
However
,
this
is not the case nowadays. A
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lot, of
lot of
course material is now available in the form of e-books or e-lectures, and a tablet or smartphone has the capacity of storing hundreds of books at the same time.
This
gives the children the choice for selecting from a wide range of books and study material available or stored in their device.
Moreover
,
this
also
gives them a choice of re-watching the lectures, learning through visual aids or videos that are available on different websites,
hence
enhancing and increasing their learning curve.
However
,
this
view is not shared by all, in
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fact, some
fact some
people believe that
this
is contributing towards the
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developement
of children negatively. Since they may be using the electronic devices excessively and for purposes other than studies.
This
may include games, entertainment, restricted websites, etc.
In addition
, they
also
believe that
this
also
contributes negatively towards their health since they spend more time sitting and using these devices,
instead
of doing sports and physical activities.
However
,
this
may not be the case since we have filters and controlling measures available in the electronic devices which enables the parents,
a person who cares for persons or property
guardians
gaurdians
or teachers
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control
to control
what and when their child or student is using a smartphone or tablet. In conclusion, the advantages of
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the use
use
of
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
technolgy
for learning overweigh the disadvantages,
hence
we should not discourage it. But we should manage a perfect mix between the use of technology along with the physical
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developement
of the children to ensure their healthy growth.

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