The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

Undoubtedly, wildlife habitats are being destroyed and wild species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on the land and in the sea.
This
essay will highlight what are the reasons behind
this
and some potential measures to resolve it. To commence with, there are two main reasons why animals are disappearing.
Firstly
, in many parts of the world trees are being cut down to make a way for farmland on which to grow crops and keep animals.
Suggestion
Such
such
agriculture practices involve clearing huge plots of land inhabited by
Suggestion
the local fauna
local fauna
, resulting in the loss of habitats for the native animals.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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