Being a celebrity - such as a movie star or professional athlete - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks?
The
film
industry
in present world
has a great importance due to their beauty ,
actingAccept space
,
,
they are key role in giving the entertainment for the Accept space
,
society
and it has the responsibility to teach moral and ethics to
the Suggestion
of
society
.in
the controversySuggestion
In
,
the celebrates are focusing on their beauty and their wealth rather than the have moral stories for the Accept space
,
society
,
Accept space
,
this
would lead to bad impacts on the youth in the society
.in
extendSuggestion
In
,
the Accept space
,
film
industry
becoming the business to earn large amount of money with their movies of no ethics and morals, this
might show bad atmosphere for people in present
Suggestion
the present world
world
.
as
the Suggestion
As
film
celebrates are more focusing on the beauty and acting skills, as they are using
as a weapon on the youth to attract towards the celebrates.In the present Suggestion
used
world
, the film
industry
is mostly focusing on the A grade movies to the audience towards the celebrates to make lump sum
of money with the single project.These Suggestion
a lump sum
film
celebrates are exposing Suggestion
films
there
of them or themselves
their
body
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bodies
to
public for drawing attention towards them and get popular person in the Suggestion
in
film
industry
.for
exampleSuggestion
For
,
in Indian Accept space
,
film
industry there
are Accept comma addition
industry, there
lot
of A grade movies like dirty picture, Suggestion
lots
kamasutra
and many more.The motto of Suggestion
Kama sutra
kama sutra
this
movies
that to draw the attention in the public Suggestion
movie
with out
having any in absence of
without
more ethics
.
The Suggestion
more ethical
another
aspect of having not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
bad impact
on the youthSuggestion
a bad impact
,
the Accept space
,
film
celebrates are more focused on improving their wealth rather than their achievements in the their life time
career.the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
in
Suggestion
In
present situation
Suggestion
the present situation
,
the Accept space
,
film
celebrates are concentrating high remuneration in short period
of time by committing to unsuccessful stories.Suggestion
a short period
these
celebrates are less concern on their achievements in their work place.
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These
in
wrapping up the above essaySuggestion
In
,
the films in present market are showing bad effect on the Accept space
,
society
.so
the to a very great extent or degree
So
film
has to concentrate more on the ethical stories to the teach the morals to
the Suggestion
of
society
,
so we can reduce the crimes which are Accept space
,
on going
in the present currently happening
ongoing
world
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