Being a celebrity - such as a movie star or professional athlete - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks?

The
film
industry
in present
world
has a great importance due to their beauty
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,
,
acting
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,
,
they are key role in giving the entertainment for the
society
and it has the responsibility to teach moral and ethics
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of
to
the
society
.
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In
in
the controversy
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,
,
the celebrates are focusing on their beauty and their wealth rather than the have moral stories for the
society
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,
,
this
would lead to bad impacts on the youth in the
society
.
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In
in
extend
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,
,
the
film
industry
becoming the business to earn large amount of money with their movies of no ethics and morals,
this
might show bad atmosphere for people in
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the present world
present
world
.
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As
as
the
film
celebrates are more focusing on the beauty and acting skills, as they are
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used
using
as a weapon on the youth to attract towards the celebrates.In the present
world
, the
film
industry
is mostly focusing on the A grade movies to the audience towards the celebrates to make
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a lump sum
lump sum
of money with the single project.These
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films
film
celebrates are exposing
of them or themselves
their
there
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bodies
body
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in
to
public for drawing attention towards them and get popular person in the
film
industry
.
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For
for
example
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,
,
in Indian
film
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industry, there
industry there
are
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lots
lot
of A grade movies like dirty picture,
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Kama sutra
kama sutra
kamasutra
and many more.The motto of
this
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movie
movies
that to draw the attention in the public
in absence of
without
with out
having any
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more ethical
more ethics
. The
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
aspect of having
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a bad impact
bad impact
on the youth
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,
,
the
film
celebrates are more focused on improving their wealth rather than their achievements in the their
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
life time
career.
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in
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the present situation
present situation
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,
,
the
film
celebrates are concentrating high remuneration in
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a short period
short period
of time by committing to unsuccessful stories.
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These
these
celebrates are less concern on their achievements in their work place.
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In
in
wrapping up the above essay
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,
,
the films in present market are showing bad effect on the
society
.
to a very great extent or degree
So
so
the
film
has to concentrate more on the ethical stories to the teach the morals
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of
to
the
society
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,
,
so we can reduce the crimes which are
currently happening
ongoing
on going
in the present
world
.

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