Some people say that in all levels of education; from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Mr. & Mrs. Smith, I hope
this
letter finds you in the pink your health and the best of spirits. I am writing
this
letter to say thank you for allowing me to stay with your family during my study in the USA. I will not forget
this
kind gesture of yours in my life. After moving to the home
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country, I
country I
have realized that it was the home away home. Unfortunately, I have been missing the great time which we had together. Specially, the dishes were cooked by
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an aunt
aunt
, like grilled chicken or pasta with fish. Not only the food, but I had
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an excellent time
excellent time
on the weekends by playing rugby with
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an uncle
uncle
and his friends. Unluckily, no one
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follows
follow
the American sports here. Let me share
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the good news
good news
with you. I have gotten an internship opportunity to work at the Investment bank for six months. During
this
period, I am responsible for
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
devloping
various software applications for the bankers to increase their productivity. I am very excited for
this
job to start on 1st April, 2020. I hope to see you soon. Take care!
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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