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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught.  To what extent do you agree/disagree?

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In todays' world education plays a significant role in our lives. A part of society will respect the educated person more rather than an uneducated. Education is very important for every individual so that, schools and colleges should focus more on the academics with numerous ways of teaching.
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, general skills
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 as making food and dressing are
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 important to lead the mundane
life
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. According to me, academics with general skills is preferable. The subsequent paragraphs will give a better insight into
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 topic. In order to test the knowledge of a
student
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, colleges and school conduct exams for every particular period of time. The
student
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 will improve more by facing these exams. To achieve the triumph in these exams,
management
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 should teach in a proper manner. Procuring practical knowledge helps in numerous ways to understand the topics and lessons.
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, one my cousin who invests most of his time on practical approach, made his own alarm clock.
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,
management
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 should help students to procure practical knowledge by conducting some assignments and by arranging labs.
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 paves the way to achieve triumph, for every
student
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 not only to pass the exams, but
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 to apply it in daily
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.
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, certain individuals believe that only academics are crucial in
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life
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. Along with these some general skills
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 plays a significant role. Cooking and dressing are fundamentals in our
life
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, these are essential to lead the prosaic
life
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. Many of the multinational companies focus on the way of dressing, as it shows the professionally. Not only way of dressing and cooking, but
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 some other basic things we do in our daily
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 ease to lead the
life
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. Overall, education is necessary to triumph in
life
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. Nowadays, due to heavy competition,
management
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 should encourage a practical
wayway
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 of approach and it would be an appropriate to face the competitive world. Along with these, some general skills
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 as cooking and dressing will ease our lives.
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, these are learnt in our daily
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, these can't' be taught by the
management
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 of schools and colleges, we have to learn from our own.

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