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For centuries important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree ?

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one
 of the significant essentials in the life of a human being. Reading, writing and mathematics are crucial things in
list
Suggestion
the list
 of educational
prominence
.
Computer
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one
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th
definite article
the
 present decade. Nowadays, without
computer
 many of tasks will not happen. Certain Individuals believe that
computer
 technology is to be included in the
prominence
list
. According to me, computing should be a part of that
list
. Because reading, writing and math can be done with
computer
 in less time, it should be included in the
list
. In todays world, most of the human activities are
automized
make optimal; get the most out of; use best
optimized
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 using technology. Education is
one
 of the significant essentials in the life of a human being. Reading, writing and mathematics are crucial things in
list
Suggestion
List
of
Suggestion
Of
 educational
prominence
.
Computer
 is
one
 of the tremendous inventions which is trending in
th
definite article
the
present
Suggestion
Present
 decade. Nowadays, without
computer
 many of tasks will not happen. Certain Individuals believe that
computer
 technology is to be included in the
prominence
list
 . According to me, computing should be a part of that
list
 . Because reading, writing and math can be done with
computer
 in less time, it should be included in the
list
 .

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