In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

It is
such
pleasure things that
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fall
are falling
falling
in love, getting married and having own children as well as completing the milestone of life.
However
, more and more people think that it is early to have children when they are just married.
Hence
, it is important for us to discuss the reasons for
this
development and the effects on society and family life.
First
of all, the married couples that are busy at work become the significant reason, for they suppose that they are still young and do not anxious about putting the matter of having a child
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in
at
the
first
place.
Therefore
, they are willing to pay the effort on their career or even lengthen their working hour to earn more money that may be the fund of children's education fee.
Furthermore
, the married couples prefer to enjoy their private time without the disturbance of children. If they have the children, they will be restricted by the presence of children because they may think the education of children and the money
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spent
spending
on the children's sports.
Besides
, the productivity of
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the country
a country
country
is
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declining
declined
as the effect of
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the low
the lower
birth rate. Because of the shortage of children, the adults need to work for a long time and directly affect the quality of products. The government
also
must bear the burden of the high rate of aging as they have the pressure of taking care the large number of elder. In terms of family, the parents have not the opportunity to see their children's growth and it is unfortunate for the children that cannot have the contact with grandparents. In conclusion, I support that if the couples haven't the willingness to pregnant, they can adopt the orphan, but must be agreed by the whole family. It is good suggestion to decrease the social problems and spend love to the orphan.

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