Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is generally acknowledged that
language
barrier had been a major problem in all walks of inhabitants as it has universal appeal.
However
, every culture has its
specialties
an expert who is devoted to one occupation or branch of learning
specialists
in term of
language
and culture. There had been
divergent speculation form
Suggestion
a divergent speculation form
all corners of the
world but
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world, but
I would give opinion according to my stand point The advocates of firs perspective claim that residing in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
areas where somebody have to speak
second
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a second language
the second language
language
creates a barrier in
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
and business as well.
For instance
,
communication gap
Suggestion
the communication gap
is the main problem as it would be really hard to communicate with the non- native speakers. According to BBC survey, thousands of businessman
have
Suggestion
has
to hire translator to deal with the situation. Another drawback can be in the knowledge acquisition
such
as if some non-native speaker
are
Suggestion
is
to get the
education
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education, then
then
they would have to achieve
certain level
Suggestion
a certain level
of English level. To exemplify, we can have a look at the CNN report. There are millions of students who study abroad to brighten their future and
language
barrier is the major problem for them. As foreign
language
create
Suggestion
creates
social
disorder but
Accept comma addition
disorder, but
it
also
has some positive aspects as
language
study helps to know about the cultures, different nations and mutual co-operation around the globe, scientific discoveries are only possible due to sharing information and social interaction. In culmination of above lines we may opine that no doubt society, culture and languages are the major barriers among human’s interactions through different means like education, business and trade can bring more benefits

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